I am now in the editing phase of my book. I have it printed out and in a folder, and when EB gives me a second, I try to get a chapter read. I keep finding minor inconsistencies in the storyline when I went back to the beginning from the middle to flesh out the plot. I can’t pass it on to any of my friends yet–not until I at least have the story straight and most of the obvious errors corrected. This is what I did when I worked seasonally for SXSW earlier this year, so it would be against my nature to have someone add commas for me.
And for some reason just reading and redlining this thing is taking longer than writing it! But I happened to get some office supplies in the mail to review, which was lovely timing because I did so happen to need highlighters, ballpoint pens, and a felt tipped pen. It’s an editor’s dream come true!
First let’s talk about these highlighters. They are kind of amazing. Did you know that Sharpie makes a Gel Highlighter? Whaat. I’ve never heard of such a thing. It came in a pack of pink, orange, and yellow. I’m pretty traditional when it comes to using yellow. Pink and orange are kind of distracting to me. But whatevs, when the yellow runs out I’m totally using the other two. If you run back and forth over the word it smudges it, but so does a regular highlighter. But the idea is that it won’t dry out. And with a kiddo that runs around trying out all of my pens and leaving them open, this is a major plus. The downside is that the cap doesn’t stay on the end. They should always fit on the end.
Speaking of drying out, I’m a huge fan of a ballpoint pen. I love that they don’t smudge, bleed through the page, and you don’t have to worry about finding the top. So the clicky-top ones are my fave. These Paper Mate Ink Joys in a pack of four was just right. It came with two black ones, a red, and a blue. I hardly ever use blue, but I like free things.
I used a lot of felt tip pens/permanent markers in school when drawing in sketchbooks, but I hated taking notes with them. They go right through the lined pages in the spiral. I was all set to think this Sharpie Premium Pen would go unused by me, but it was surprisingly smooth to write with. I might even like it over the ball points, which is a complete shock (as far as one can get shocked by using pens). And when I looked on the other side of my double-sided rough draft, it didn’t bleed through! I didn’t realize this was possible. It’s a fancy stainless steel has a nice weight to it. It’s the kind of pen you’d give someone to sign some binding contract, like trading for your kids to pay off all of your school loans. Not that I’d ever think of doing something like that. Who would ever.
Sidenote: the terrible two’s were a bit much for me this morning, and guess who veto’d a nap! Yes, EB is rubbing her peanut butter sandwich on her feet right now.
I guess EB’s case of the coo-coos is balancing the universe since she let me nap for 4 hours yesterday. Right?
Editing Jells.


Yeah I do that too. Peanut butter is great for exfoliating.
And getting gum out of your hair, apparently.
The sound of a blue Sharpie hitting paper is one of beauty. It has to be blue.
Make sure to get the right people to look it over. Only my dad started to read my book and all he said was it was really good. I know he at least read the first 3 pages because he referenced a character. He was on disability for 2 weeks and didn’t read it. He never will. But hey, there is still hope for you.
Blue, huh? My dad gave me his book to read and I trudged through it, then he gave me another one and it’s still sitting in my file cabinet. You’re right, finding someone who actually likes the subject matter is way important. I’ve had some sweet offers from friends who say they don’t really like these kinds of books but they’d read it. Very sweet of them, but I don’t want to torture anyone.
I’m definitely not giving this book to my dad to read. No way, no how.
I’m a purple ink devotee. My students seem to think my margin notes are kinder in purple. It must feel so good to print your novel out. I’m impressed! Let the editing begin.
You know, purple does seem nicer than red, for sure. I don’t know if I ever caught on to my teachers pulling fast ones with ink color!
Revision should take longer. It’s where the actual writing happens. First drafts are just getting the raw material on paper. All the other drafts are where you actually make it good.
You know, I think I forgot about that even though it was my whole grad school career with landscape architecture. It’s easy to come up with ideas, but it’s hard to make them work.
Yeah, mine was in creative writing. Revision was 60% of my time for three years straight. Reading was another 30%.
Just edit it!
Super BIG congratulations for getting to the edit stage! When I’m writing, I spend a lot of time muttering to my self as I read my words aloud. Is EB still at the puppy stage where she doesn’t quite get the words, but if the tone is right she is happy? Perhaps story time could double as book edit time:)